the original story- don't peek if you don't want to know (it'll never get written so I guess it doesn't matter, but still....)
I made up the idea of the camouflage suit, but it was originally supposed to be a much older version Jack hiding behind it. The grave is the Doctor's and when the Doctor died Jack lost it completely and spiraled out of control and in a drunken rage destroyed the Tardis. Much later, finally sober and calmed down he regretted what he'd done but couldn't do anything about it. But eventually he was able to travel back in time (I hadn't quite decided how yet) and purposely got himself drunk and drugged so he'd have a small breakdown then and there and not the massive one later. Like I said, I majorily trimmed it down...
no subject
I made up the idea of the camouflage suit, but it was originally supposed to be a much older version Jack hiding behind it. The grave is the Doctor's and when the Doctor died Jack lost it completely and spiraled out of control and in a drunken rage destroyed the Tardis. Much later, finally sober and calmed down he regretted what he'd done but couldn't do anything about it. But eventually he was able to travel back in time (I hadn't quite decided how yet) and purposely got himself drunk and drugged so he'd have a small breakdown then and there and not the massive one later. Like I said, I majorily trimmed it down...