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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2008-03-06 11:39 pm
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The Concussion Check

Title: The Concussion Check
Pairing/Rating/Warning: NCIS fandom, no spoilers, rated G
Word Count: 573
Summary:  Gibbs shows a softer side when taking care of a wounded DiNozzo
Beta: [personal profile] unfeathered
Author's note: Written for [personal profile] chatona who wanted some NCIS h/c.

“DiNozzo?”  Gibbs kept his voice steady.  “Up and at 'em.”  Leaning over he grabbed the other man's shoulder and gave a gentle shake.  “I don't pay you to sleep.”  Mindful of the makeshift bandage, Gibbs ran a knuckle up and down Tony's cheek.  “Dinozzo!”

Tony's eyes flew open.  He blinked groggily twice before making an unintelligible murmur, his eyes sliding shut again.  

Gibbs continued to stroke his cheek, trying to get another reaction.  “You gotta wake up now, Tony.”

“Hmm?  Wha' s'matter?”  His eyes opened again slowly, his face scrunching up in pain.

“It's time for your concussion check.”  Gibbs took Tony's chin in his hand, trying to get a better look at him.  “You with me?”

“M'good Boss,” Tony replied, with a worrying slur to his words.

“Time for some questions, then.”  He already knew Tony had a concussion.  Gibbs wasn't sure if he remembered what the standard symptoms to watch out for were, or if it mattered if they appeared out here in the middle of nowhere with nothing he could do about it, but he wasn't the type to sit back and do nothing.  So he asked, “Name?”  

This time the pause before the answer was less noticeable, “Anthony DiNozzo.”

“What's today's date?”

But there was no denying the panic on Tony's face as he bit his lip, trying to concentrate.  “Um, I dunno.... What... where?”  He squinted, trying to focus on the trees and rocks directly behind Gibbs. 

“We were following Lieutenant Carmichael...”  Gibbs began, just as he had for the last two concussion checks. 

“Carmichael...”  Tony parroted.

“The forger.”  Gibbs paused, but when Tony didn't speak again he continued, “We suspected he was meeting his contacts to hand off the fake IDs...”

“Right.  I remem'er now.  He led us on a car chase to the middle of nowhere.”  He groaned and brought a hand up to his head.  “How long's it been since the gun fight?”  

“Seven hours.”  Gibbs let out a breath he hadn't realized he'd been holding.  Tony remembered the gun fight; that was good.  Hell, that was great.  No matter how Gibbs had prompted him before Tony hadn’t been able to remember anything that happened after smashing his head on the windshield when the car was run off the road and crashed into the ditch.  Somehow Tony had managed to stay coherent enough to lay down cover fire while Gibbs killed the people firing at them, but he’d passed out as soon as the shooting stopped and the danger had passed.

“Then, it's Tuesday?”  It was definitely a question, not a statement, but Gibbs didn't care.

“Yep.”   He reached over to reposition the jackets over Tony.  “You still cold?”

“Quit bein’ a mother hen.  'M fine,” but he shifted closer, pressing up against Gibbs’s side for warmth.

“Oh yeah, just fine.  You’ve only bled on me and passed out on me and thrown up on me- twice.”  Gibbs moved his arm so it would be easier for Tony to lay his head against his chest.  “I’ll wake you in another two hours, by then it should be light enough for us to follow the road out of the hills and back to the highway.  It shouldn’t be more than a half a day’s walk, maybe less if we get in range of a cell phone tower before that.”

“Lookin’ forward to it already, Boss.”

“I know.”  Gibbs sighed, pulling Tony closer.  “Now get some sleep.”

[identity profile] phoenix64.livejournal.com 2008-03-07 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I so love those boys. *squeezes them*

[identity profile] kensieg.livejournal.com 2008-03-07 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
loved this story!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-07 04:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! This was my first foray into writing Gibbs and Tony, I'm glad it worked. :)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-07 04:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*vbg* thanks!

[identity profile] le-russe-satan.livejournal.com 2008-03-07 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love motherhen!Gibbs. ^^
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2008-03-07 09:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, very sweet!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-07 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-07 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, and thanks for catching the typos!
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2008-03-07 10:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, come on, I was trying to be all subtle and not mention the typos in public! *g*

Everyone - there were only two tiny ones and they were both the same tiny mistake so it really wasn't a big deal!!!

*hugs you*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-07 10:09 pm (UTC)(link)
And I was shouting your beta-wonders from the rooftops! *twirls you*
unfeathered: (Pocoyo giggle)

[personal profile] unfeathered 2008-03-07 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggles* You're daft and I love you. *dances with you*
unfeathered: (I haz been snorgled)

[personal profile] unfeathered 2008-03-07 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee - that's so cute!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-07 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Dance party! woo-hoo! Image

[identity profile] snufflesdbear.livejournal.com 2008-03-08 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
Been a G/D fan longer than a Torchwood fan.
That was so cute, and very In Character. I was a little hesitant, was afraid they'd end up sounding like J/I or O. I've been disappointed before...
Any hope of a TW/NCIS crossover out of you? You know, something involving donuts... *SNORT!*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-08 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it! And I'm so happy you thought my characterizations worked!

The donuts have, believe it or not, already made their way to NCIS, via [livejournal.com profile] itsarift_thing's Coffee Break Time. (http://itsarift-thing.livejournal.com/31111.html)

I wrote a very short Jack&Ducky ficlet a bit back called The Autopsy Table (http://donutsweeper.livejournal.com/61187.html) in response to a prompt, but I am attempting a Jack in NCIS story as well.

[identity profile] chatona.livejournal.com 2008-03-08 09:41 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know how coherent I was to begin with, but now? Uh. Words? What? *flails happily* Me -> love.

No, seriously, it's gorgeous *bounces* And so very pretty. And I don't know why, but I adore Tony's slur. It's great :D And I love that Gibbs is so worried (without saying it out loud of course, 'cause where would we be if Gibbs actually admitted he was worried for Tony? :D) and *babbles*

Whee! It's great! And I love it! And!

“M'good Boss,” Tony replied, with a worrying slur to his words.
That is so Tony. He'd make a big deal about a papercut but when it's serious, he'll never say a word *loves*

And I absolutely love the way you managed to explain their situation without saying it directly. 's great! :D

They're both so adorable - in a totally manly way, of course *pokes them* - and I melted just a tiny wee little bit when Tony curled up against Gibbs' side (the mental image! it is pretteh!) and *sighs happily*

Oh, and this? “Oh yeah, just fine. You’ve only bled on me and passed out on me and thrown up on me- twice.” I could literally hear Gibbs say that in my head.

So, yeah. That was brilliant. I actually read it before going to bed last night, but I was too wrecked to reply then, so now you get a sleepy/babbling reply now *nods*

For me? *squees*

[identity profile] mylogiceatsyou.livejournal.com 2008-03-08 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, I love Gibbs being all protective of his team, especially of Tony.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-08 04:41 pm (UTC)(link)
*hugs* I'm thrilled you liked it!

And you pointed out all the things I love about those boys- Tony's 'oh, ow I have a cramp' but won't complain about a gunshot or whatever; and Gibbs is so protective and cares so much, but would NEVER admit it- I'm so glad I was able get that to come out in my story.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-08 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it :)
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[personal profile] kaylashay81 2008-03-08 07:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I love mother-hen Gibbs. He is, even if many can't see that. Maybe it's more that he is marine-hen Gibbs. :-)

Like Gibbs worry and then happiness over what Tony did and didn't remember. And even Tony knew something was wrong when he couldn't remember the date.

Then he snuggled closer after he said he was fine... His body knew what his mouth didn't.

Sweet. :-)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-08 09:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Gibbs is a wonderful mother-hen, even if he'd rather no one knew that about him. Glad you liked this!

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2008-03-09 08:42 am (UTC)(link)
Um it's first thing in the morning here and GUH implies something else entirely but

GUH I love your Gibbs so much

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2008-03-09 08:44 am (UTC)(link)
Hey lookit! Pocoyo :D
unfeathered: (Pocoyo giggle)

[personal profile] unfeathered 2008-03-09 09:47 am (UTC)(link)
Yep, I did get round to choosing one eventually! :-)

(Have to say, I gave the programme itself a try and didn't think much of it, but the characters are cute!)

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