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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2007-10-30 10:02 am
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Uh-oh

Title: Uh-oh
Pairing/Rating/Warning: none, rated G
Word Count: 100
Summary: There's something neither Owen nor Ianto want to tell Jack....
Author's Note:  Some silliness written for [profile] jadesfire2808

“You tell him.”  Owen shoved the bundle at Ianto.

“You did it.”  Ianto pushed it back.

“But he won’t kill you.”  Owen replied, worriedly.

“He won’t kill you.  Perhaps maim, but not kill.”

“It’ll be better, coming from you.”  Owen pressed the bundle into Ianto’s hands.

‘Either way, he won’t be happy.”  Ianto sighed.

Jack walked in.  “Who won’t be happy?”  

“Jack!”  They yelled, the bundle dropping to the floor.

Jack eyed the bundle.  “Is that pile of rags my greatcoat?”  His question careful, deliberate.

Owen and Ianto nodded guiltily.

Jack shrugged.  “There’s a whole box of them in storage.”

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-10-30 03:40 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! (and no beta critique? That's probably a first!)
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-10-30 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oi! *is offended* I quite often don't have anything to correct!

You didn't use any speech tags. They're usually where you get your punctuation confused... *g*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-10-30 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
lol, good point! I was just shocked nothing slipped by me since I dashed it off in such a hurry.