I Said No!

[donutsweeper]

Title: I Said No!
Pairing/Warning/Rating: NCIS fandom, no pairings, rated G
Word Count: 100
Summary: Tony's bugging Abby.
Author's Note: Written for the ncisdrabble100 challenge: hundreds.  Now with commentary.


“Abs....”

“No.”

“Abbbbbsssss....”

“No!”

“Abby....”

“I said no.”

“But, Ab-bbbbbeeeee....”

“Tony, for the hundredth time, the answer is no.”

“You’re mean.”

“And you’re getting on my last nerve.”

“I just want to...”

“I know, but I said no.  The doctor said no. Ducky said no. Gibbs said no.  Everyone said no.”

“But...”

“No.”

“Don’t tell them.”

“Gibbs’ll know anyway.”

“Maybe not.”

“You really believe that?”

“No.”

“See?”

“But, Abs...”

“Anthony DiNozzo, I don’t care that Tom Selleck autographing “Magnum” DVDs down at the mall.  Your ass is staying in that bed until Ducky clears you.  I promised Gibbs.”

“But...”

“No.”

Comments

[philleegirl.livejournal.com]

Now that is cute! Good brother/sister dynamic going on there. I can see them fighting, but Tony will start pouting and win the day.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Probably, but the wrath of Gibbs is looming. That *might* be enough to keep Tony in line. Maybe.

[philleegirl.livejournal.com]

Yeah, but I can see Abby running down to the mall and kidnapping TS. Esp. if Tony's suffered the wrath of Gibbs!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

either that or they figure out a way to get Tony to the mall without breaking the letter of the law. Like did Gibbs actually say he had to stay in bed or just that he couldn't get up? Maybe there's a little wiggle room in the orders....

[philleegirl.livejournal.com]

LOL!! Now I've got Abby pushing Tony on a hospital gurney into a FYE in my head.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

exactly! And she'd do it to! If only to stop the sad pouty face and broken voice he'd use on her.

[philleegirl.livejournal.com]

Totally! And the pout she used on Gibbs might just spare their lives.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

but Tony'd still get a headslap, although perhaps a slightly lighter one than usual. But he'd still complain about it. And all the while Gibbs would try to hide his smile at his agent's ingenuity.

[philleegirl.livejournal.com]

Oh, of course a head slap. And Gibbs's eyes would do that little twinkly thing they do and they'd both know they weren't in all that much trouble.

I think this has been the crack version of your completely believable story!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

crack is good! Can't go wrong with crack in my opinion.

[the-dark-side.livejournal.com]

I just choked on my popcorn a bit over that image. Brilliant.

[philleegirl.livejournal.com]

I giggled like crazy for a very long time over that.

[the-dark-side.livejournal.com]

I think the best part is that I could totally see it happening, too.