Powdered Sugar Reprise

[donutsweeper]

Title: Powdered Sugar Reprise
Rating/Warning: none, rated G
Word Count: 100
Summary: Owen missed out on the alien donuts the first time around...
Author's Note: Sequel to The Powdered Sugar Tornado, written for mad_jaks who I thought could use some cheering up.  Crack!fic warning.

“Owen?  What’s this?” 

Owen put the box he was carrying down.  “Just thought I’d pick up some donuts on my way to work this morning.  Really, you’d think this was the first time a guy did something nice for his teammates or something.  What kind of person do you take me for, Jack?”

Jack crossed his arms and leaned against the doorway. “Owen, I happen to know where that bakery is actually located.  You didn’t really think I wouldn’t recognize those donuts, did you?  The rift made another delivery this morning?”

Owen blushed brightly in response.

“Excellent,”  Jack said, grinning.

Comments

[unfeathered]

Catching up a bit... (though Nancy will have to wait till I'm home)

I love these donut drabbles. They are such fun. And the ending of this one is perfect!

Mind you, it should be: "Excellent," Jack said, grinning.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Glad you like them, they are fun, but I'm never sure just where exactly they are going. And thanks for the correction *sigh* I hate punctuation.

[unfeathered]

You'll get the hang of it eventually. :-)

(I hope! *g*)

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Somehow I doubt it! I think your beta skills in that regard will always be necessary and welcomed!

[unfeathered]

Well, maybe one day. If I keep telling you where you're going wrong... :-)