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donutsweeper) wrote2011-01-25 10:41 am
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Coolest library ever
Kansas City Public Library, Missouri, United States

random, I know, but I just saw the picture and had to share

random, I know, but I just saw the picture and had to share

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Absolutely random britspeak question but which sounds better "999 was called five and a half minutes ago" or
"999 was rung five and a half minutes ago" (yes, I realize both are weirdly worded, there can't be any POV marker)
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Here's the original comment version (I asked you called vs rang because I'm going to clean it up and post it, but please give it a gander and see what else is wrong with it, I know the 15:2 ratio is not standard anymore, but it works so much better than the current version of CPR
http://sherlockbbc-fic.livejournal.com/5950.html?thread=26538302#t26538302
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So, do you think called or rang? Anything else that needs changing?
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Anything else needing changing? Depending on who is the receiver of the CPR in your head and what you want to convey I'd consider capitalising the Hs in him and he with regards to Him living but nothing else, I think it's plenty powerful as it stands.
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It's John needing the CPR in my head, but I'm purposely leaving it unsaid. I hadn't really thought about capitalizing the H or not. hmmmmm