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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2007-12-14 10:14 pm
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The Snapshot

Title:  The Snapshot
Pairing/Warning/Rating: Jack Harkness/Benton Fraser, none, rated PG
Word Count: 123
Summary:  Jack enjoys a moment with Ben
Author's Note: Torchwood/Due South crossover.  Written for [personal profile] travels_in_time 
Author's Note #2: The order of the DS/TW crossovers is: Conversations with the Dead, A Mountie, a Wolf, and a Dead Man, The Captain and the Constable, The Wolf at the DoorThe Furry Doorstop, followed by Scents and Sensibilities and then this story


Jack propped himself up on one elbow, slowly running his other hand up and down along Ben’s back.  Just enough light spilled in from the window to be able to see Ben clearly.  He had fallen asleep after their lovemaking and the slightest of smiles remained on his face.  Jack brushed an errant lock of hair off Ben’s forehead before leaning over to place a gentle kiss in its place.  Sighing in his sleep, Ben burrowed closer to Jack, instinctively seeking the warmth and comfort that Jack provided.  Looking at his watch Jack realized he should have reported for duty hours ago, but the real world could wait.  This moment of closeness, this snapshot of normalcy, was one to be cherished, not rushed. 

[identity profile] travels-in-time.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:24 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwww! Too sweet!

Poor Jack, he doesn't get much normalcy, does he? And poor Fraser doesn't get nearly enough warmth and comfort.

Very nice moment you've shown here!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
not quite as sexy as you'd probably have wished, but still sweet, right? Glad you liked it!

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/ 2007-12-15 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, this is sweet and warm and made me very happy!

[identity profile] travels-in-time.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:31 am (UTC)(link)
Sexy is sort of a given for these guys! But sweet and comforting moments are not, and they're what I go for every time.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes* thanks!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
*eg* thanks so much!

Hi.

[identity profile] univacgrl.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 06:26 am (UTC)(link)
That was beautiful. I love little moments like these.

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 08:57 am (UTC)(link)
Oh that is so pretty and Jack awake while others sleep makes me a very happy lady *g*



... and this is entry number what?? :D

[identity profile] hellenebright.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 09:32 am (UTC)(link)
Awww. Lovely.

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 02:14 pm (UTC)(link)
This is a lovely little scene, a 'snapshot of normalcy' is just what these two need! Love it!
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-12-15 02:14 pm (UTC)(link)
That is adorable. I love sleepy, sweet, waking-up fics. :-)

[identity profile] 1-mad-squirrel.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 03:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Just gorgeous.

Re: Hi.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!!!

oops, it was #102!! How did I miss my 100th fic?

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
glad you liked it! (I've wanted to use that phrase in forever, I thought it up ages ago, isn't writing weird that way?)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
The idea of Jack all tousled and sleepy has it's appeal, doesn't it?

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*whistles blithely*
By design I should imagine... *grins slowly*

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Image (http://photobucket.com)
darn it that outline looks a lot pinker in here than it did in Jasc... :(

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
no, it was the dialogue writing meme. I had a burst of writing for it and the numbers got away from me

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I LOVE IT!!!!!

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I believe you :D



[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
wheee bouncy elephant time - glad you like

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
*bats eyes innocently*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I always get bouncy for presents!!!

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:21 pm (UTC)(link)
You get away with that just about as well as I do ;-)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:22 pm (UTC)(link)
the evil weevil icon doesn't help you any....

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:24 pm (UTC)(link)
evil weevil icon
evil weevil icon
evil weevil icon

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:24 pm (UTC)(link)
lol! I didn't even realize how that would sound!

[identity profile] fatchickengirl.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:33 pm (UTC)(link)
A lovely little snapshot of lovers bliss.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:37 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! glad you liked it

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:54 pm (UTC)(link)
You're a great audience or whatever the gift receiving equivalent of audience is... *scratches head*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
*brain hurting* no idea!

[identity profile] liars-dance.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 06:45 pm (UTC)(link)
lovely little moment! And thankyou for introducing me to a delicious pairing!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-15 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
you're quite welcome! I've written several Jack/Fraser stories, you can find them all with this tag (http://donutsweeper.livejournal.com/tag/due+south) although you'd want to read them in the order posted (and one is extreme crack!fic with Diefenbaker, which you may want to skip)

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2007-12-17 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
awww....Lovely.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-17 08:00 pm (UTC)(link)
*g* thanks!
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[identity profile] sam80853.livejournal.com 2008-11-12 05:39 am (UTC)(link)
Poor Jack! Bu Fraser isn't better off with his kind of normalcy

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-11-12 05:46 am (UTC)(link)
Fraser and Jack will work it out!

[identity profile] karaokegal.livejournal.com 2010-05-03 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwww! Well, no "subtlety" there. I still think they make a good couple, although still only on Jack's come and go terms.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2010-05-04 12:50 am (UTC)(link)
This was one of my first tries as writing true relationship instead of just alluding to it. glad it worked for you!