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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2007-09-10 08:05 am
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Caring for the Captain

Title:  Caring for the Captain
Pairing/Rating/Warning: Jack/Ianto, rated R
Word Count: 1271
Summary: After completing a treaty Jack needs Ianto to take care of him
Author's Notes: Written for [profile] fandom_me  who wanted fluff, with thanks to [personal profile] unfeathered for the beta and encouragement.

I carefully helped Jack out of the meeting room.  Still feeling the affects of the Korellian treaty rituals he was barely able to support himself, but I knew as long as the Ambassador could still see him, Jack had to make a good show of walking out of the room on his own.  He put one foot in front of the other, trusting me to guide him, without saying a word.  All his energy seemed to be spent staying upright.

We got into the lift and the doors swept shut.  “It’s okay, Sir.  I’ve got you.”  I murmured, steadying him as it started to move.

Jack sighed, and closed his eyes as he sagged against my arm.  The line of blue war paint on his face had smudged slightly, giving him a comical appearance.

“We’ll get all that paint washed off of you as soon as we get back to our room at the hotel.” I wasn’t sure he could even hear me.   “UNIT had all our things delivered there while you were working on the treaty with the Ambassador.  Considering... considering what you’d have to do to ensure the treaty was signed we thought it best if you stayed here tonight instead of trying to go home.”  I grasped his arm tightly, taking some of his weight, as I led him into the waiting car.

“Ianto?”  Jack slurred, his eyes opening a slit.

“I’m right here, Jack.  Just relax, we’re almost there.”

Jack muttered something unintelligible as a reply. 

It was a little worrying that Jack seemed barely aware of his surroundings.   No one had been sure how the human body would react to the cocktail of native drugs present in the war paint, so Jack had volunteered to perform the rituals as the representative from Earth.  Volunteered was perhaps the wrong word, rather insisted or demanded.  But however it happened, the consequence was that Jack was utterly drained and possibly drugged and unable to walk a straight line, let alone care for himself tonight.  The Brigadier had ordered me to keep an eye on the Captain, a job I rather relished, although I admitted nothing of the sort to the UNIT commander.

They pulled up to the back entrance of the hotel, the driver having been warned it would be better if no-one saw the Captain in his current state.  I slid out of the car and touched Jack on the cheek, trying to get his attention.  I stroked his hair gently, waiting patiently, until the blue eyes opened and then slowly focused on me.

“I’m going to help you get out of the car now, Jack.”  I explained carefully.  “Can you give me your arm?”  It was disconcerting to watch as Jack’s forehead creased and tried to make sense of what had been asked of him.  But after a moment’s pause Jack looked down at his right hand, pondering the red squiggles painted on it before offering it to me.  “Good, that’s good.  Now let’s get you up.”  Holding Jack by the hand and slipping my other hand behind Jack’s elbow I pulled the Captain to his feet.  He was upright, but swayed alarmingly.

“Ianto?  Where...”  His voice was weak, but he seemed slightly more aware of his surroundings.

“Here, lean on me, Sir.”  I slung Jack’s arm over my shoulder and placed my arm around his waist for even more support.  “We’re at the hotel.  Let’s get you to the room so you can get cleaned up.  And we’ll order some food; you haven’t eaten properly all day.”

“Not hungry.  Coffee?”  There was a child-like plea in his voice.

I laughed.  Jack and his coffee addiction!  “I’m sure we can find you some coffee as well.”

Once in the room I watched as Jack managed to slip out of his jacket and waistcoat and pull down the braces before fumbling helplessly with his shirt buttons. After a moment I stepped closer to help.  I grasped his shaking hands tightly, “It’s all right Sir, I’ve got it.”  I was slightly surprised when he let me assist him without as much as a comment.

And then Jack was shirtless.

Each and every time the sight of Jack’s bare chest never failed to leave me breathless.  I reached out to stroke a swirl of smudged war paint, but Jack quickly batted my hand away.  “No, something’s in the paint.  I don’t ... don’t want you....”  He staggered into the bathroom.  “Gotta wash it off.”

“Here, let me help.”  In Jack’s condition he might pass out and hurt himself.  I grabbed up one of the washcloths and ran it under the tap for a moment.  “Close your eyes.”  Jack just stared at me in the mirror for a moment, patiently confused.  “I want to get the paint off your face first and I don’t want it getting in your eyes.”

“Oh. Right.”  He sighed, shutting his eyes and leaning back against the wall.

So, I began slowly washing Jack’s face, starting with the forehead after brushing his hair out of the way; then carefully the eyes, pausing to marvel at the long eyelashes, and onto his cheeks.  God, those cheekbones.  I rinsed out the cloth and continued, tracing Jack’s strong jaw.   Before I even realized what I was doing, I reached forward and pulled him into a kiss.

I felt Jack’s laughter rather than heard it.  “Ianto?”  He chided, after I broke away.  “The paint?  First the paint, then...” He raised an eyebrow suggestively.

“Right.” I said, trying to get myself under control.  “Into the shower with you.”  My attempts at a stern tone of voice were ruined by bursting out laughing when Jack started to step into the shower. 

He looked at me quizzically.  “What?”

“Since when do you shower with your trousers on?” 

I’d meant it as a joke, but he looked terribly embarrassed, nearly hanging his head in shame.  “I’m sorry, I didn’t mean...  Here let me.” With a hand on the wall he steadied himself as I undid his trousers and helped him out of his remaining clothing.

The sight of my Captain naked is truly one to behold.

I took a deep breath, trying to control myself, as I stripped down as well.

“I can do this myself,” he commented, pouting slightly.

“And how do you plan on scrubbing the paint off your back?” 

“Oh,” he grinned sheepishly.  “Right.”

Once the water had warmed up he let me help him into the shower.  I knew it was slightly wrong of me, but I was rather enjoying Jack in this passive state.  He didn’t protest being lathered up, he just let me run the washcloth over his body.  And after the soap and paint had been washed off he leaned up against me as I ran my hands over his stomach and pressed him tighter against me.  His breath was warm and soft against my shoulder.  I couldn’t help but grin when, even utterly exhausted, he began to grow hard in response to my ministrations.

 “Not yet,” I whispered, “you need to rest first.”

He sighed in agreement, and snuggled deeper into my arms.  We stayed in the shower together until the water began to run cold.  Then I grabbed some towels and dried us both off.  Jack made it back to the bedroom under his own power but sank onto the bed, still dressed only in the towel.
                                       
“Thanks for this Ianto,” he said as he gestured his hand around the room. 

“You have to know I’d do anything for you by now.”

His eyes twinkled. “Anything?” Grinning wickedly he asked, “then where’s that coffee you promised me?”

[identity profile] fandom-me.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 01:42 pm (UTC)(link)
This is awesome - and so are you for writing me not just fluff, but good fluff and Ianto fluff and FIRST PERSON FLUFF. Thank you, so much, and wonderful, awesome, job. LOVE the last couple of lines like burning.
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-09-10 01:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm curious - does first person make a difference?

[identity profile] fandom-me.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
It does for me *G* I like first person A LOT.
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-09-10 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Really? I actually hadn't noticed that. Seriously.

*Goes to check if she's writing something in 1st person. Realises she is.* That's all right then! :-)

[identity profile] fandom-me.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
ROFL. I do like first person. IT's hard, though, so I tend to NOT do it. Reading it rocks all over, though, because it's so freaking intimate - and close POV makes me happy.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
and it being fluff doesn't hurt either, right? :)

[identity profile] fandom-me.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 06:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Absolutely NOT. It was so good to read happy stuff.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
You asked for it, you got it! I am so glad you liked it!

[identity profile] jadesfire2808.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 01:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is lovely. Fun and sweet and just right. *happy sigh* Lovely.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 02:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much!

[identity profile] pfyre.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
oh - quite lovely that - do love Ianto caring for Jack...

nicely done - love your characterization

thanks for sharing

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 02:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading and commenting!
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-09-10 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, you already know I like this but just to reiterate in public:

I think this is incredibly sweet. I love dopey Jack, and I can just imagine Ianto being at his happiest being needed to take care of Jack in this state.

And I love this line: Volunteered was perhaps the wrong word, rather insisted or demanded. It's very Jack.

And shirtless Jack.

And the last line. You have a real knack for amusing last lines that leave me smiling :-)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 02:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Can't go wrong with shirtless Jack, right? Without your help this fic would have never seen the light of day, thanks again!
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-09-10 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Can't go wrong with shirtless Jack, right?

Definitely not. There can never be too much shirtless Jack! *g*

[identity profile] shotgunteacup.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 02:09 pm (UTC)(link)
this made my hours of coursework so much better ! thanks (:

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I aim to please!

[identity profile] emlyn-rune.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 02:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I love good fluff. Makes up for having to go into work on very short notice!
More please? Want to see if Jack gets the coffee he was promised... :)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 03:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Would Ianto dare deny Jack coffee? Glad I helped make your work bearable!

[identity profile] tami-brown.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 02:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, this was wonderful to come online after work to....made my day.

[identity profile] joulez217.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I like this, really like this. Although it is First Person Point Of View, not something I really read, I did like this one! :D Well done, I liked a lot! :D You made me smile for the afternoon :D

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it, but I'm curious, why don't you usually read first person POV?

[identity profile] joulez217.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Cause it makes me feel like I'm reading it as myself and not the character it was intended to be. Just not my cuppa tea.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahh, makes sense. It is much harder to write without feeling like a voyeur.

[identity profile] joulez217.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I've never actually tried to write FPPOV, altough I have wrote as that character's point of view. What they were thinking while stuff was happening etc, etc.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/ 2007-09-10 02:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is seven kinds of adorable. <3

[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Very sweet. Thanks.

[identity profile] dserene1.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh this was nice, and I have to agree, writing it in the first person gives it much more impact. You've got a lovely way of writing Ianto's thoughts.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 07:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I always find Ianto a little hard to write for, I'm glad you thought my interpretation of him worked!

[identity profile] mandy-mck.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 07:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww. :D loved this. Fluff = just what i needed. Thanks this was gorgeous. xxxx

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad to oblige! Thanks!

[identity profile] miriel.livejournal.com 2007-09-10 11:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Yet another cliche done right ^_^ Really, there's just nothing better than "Alien Chemicals, Human Bodies"

One small question: When Jack washes the paint off in the shower, since they're using hot water, aren't the chemicals likely to end up in the steam, thus exposing Ianto?

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-11 12:12 am (UTC)(link)
Not if the drugs were only topical in origin, like most pharmaceutical ointments.

[identity profile] szm.livejournal.com 2007-09-11 12:03 am (UTC)(link)
awww that was lovely! Thanks for that *g*

[identity profile] hellenebright.livejournal.com 2007-09-11 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent fluff. Excellent "aliens made me do it" fluff.

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2007-09-12 10:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh shower fic is always good especially when there's plotty reason. Lovely.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-12 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Can't go wrong with a shower scene, right? *grins*

[identity profile] tiggerbrasilf.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 07:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggles* mmm a nice compliant Jack (: Is Ianto going to get his reward in another fic? (:

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-18 09:25 pm (UTC)(link)
You never know... *grins*

[identity profile] bodleian.livejournal.com 2007-09-19 12:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I really enjoyed reading this - and that last line made me laugh out loud. Congratulations.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-19 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
It *is* coffee we're talking about. Glad you liked it!

[identity profile] laurab1.livejournal.com 2007-09-20 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww :) I love that.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-20 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! :-)

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2007-11-07 01:16 pm (UTC)(link)
First person is good. Shower fic with pretty men is good. Put both together and it's better than good. Love it!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-07 01:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it! Jack and Ianto in the shower... its certainly nice to think about, no?