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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2007-12-17 10:38 am
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The Most (un)Wonderful Time of the Year

Title:  The Most (un)Wonderful Time of the Year
Pairing/Warning/Rating: none, rated G
Word Count: 100
Summary:  Jack envies the team this time of year
Author's Note: written for [community profile] tw100's Christmasolstikwanzakah Songs challenge


The team enjoyed this time of year.  They had loved ones to spend the holidays with.  Jack didn’t.  They had nieces and nephews to buy toys for, grandmothers that worried enough to send homemade scarves to ward off the chill, and mums who sent fudge.

He’d sit and listen as they prattled on about their Christmas plans.  When they asked, if they asked, he’d plaster a smile on his face and spin some story of plans of his own.  They didn’t know there was no one waiting for him under the mistletoe, and he wanted to keep it that way.

[identity profile] kensieg.livejournal.com 2007-12-17 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-17 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks!

[identity profile] phoenix64.livejournal.com 2007-12-17 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm torn between "Awww" and "Goddammit, Jack, people would make you part of their lives if you'd let them." But I have Issues.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-17 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
no, no, no, that's exactly what I was going for! He might not have biological family, but if he pushed a bit he'd have a ready made family of friends right there!
ext_15374: (james)

[identity profile] idontlikegravy.livejournal.com 2007-12-18 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, not many fics manage to make want to both hug and bitchslap Jack at the same time. In fact this is probably the first. Nice one :)

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2007-12-18 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
I want to grab hold of him, shake him and tell him that friends are the family you chose for yourself before attacking him with the mistletoe that I've hidden in my pocket. You've doen very well to manage to make me feel all awwwww and exasperated at the same time.

And if he ain't interested in the team under the mistletoe, there's always Janet...

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-18 01:14 am (UTC)(link)
:) Just don't slap him too hard! Glad you liked it!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-18 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
Personally, I'd rather attack Jack with the mistletoe than Janet... but that's just me! :D
unfeathered: (Jack S2 promo)

[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-12-18 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, Jack and his self-imposed distance from everyone! Silly boy. Someone give him a hug! :-)

Typo: scarves to ward of the chill - off

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-18 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
off.. of... *grrr* thanks! :)

[identity profile] staceyuk.livejournal.com 2007-12-22 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Silly Jack! *hugs him anyway*

[identity profile] ladyharkness.livejournal.com 2007-12-22 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh Jack. You silly boy.

I like how you make me want to hug him and hit upside of the head all in just 100 words. Genius.

*goes to back to despairing at Jack*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-22 08:02 pm (UTC)(link)
glad you liked! :-)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-22 08:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Despair at Jack all you like!

[identity profile] 1-mad-squirrel.livejournal.com 2007-12-22 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm buying Jack a clue for Christmas.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-22 08:40 pm (UTC)(link)
He could certainly use one! :)

[identity profile] a-flame-within.livejournal.com 2007-12-22 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I culd be wating under the mistletoe for him lol.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-22 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I say go for it! *g*

[identity profile] secbeth.livejournal.com 2007-12-23 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
*aww* THat's sad!!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-23 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
*sorry* :)

[identity profile] riftugee.livejournal.com 2007-12-24 04:11 pm (UTC)(link)
So clever sometimes, and so stupid others! JACK, Jack, Jack...

*helps gift wrap the clue from 1_mad_squirrel*

Lovely piece. I'm always amazed at what people can do with drabbles and this is an excellent example of that power.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-24 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much!

[identity profile] laurab1.livejournal.com 2007-12-27 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Silly boy, Jack.

Love it :)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-27 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you!