Alien Donut Doings

[donutsweeper]

Title: Alien Donut Doings
Pairing/Warning/Rating: Jack/John, none, rated PG
Word Count: 100
Summary: It started with an invitation for a nightcap...
Author's Note:  TW/SGA crossover.  Tenth in the alien donut crack!fic series.

“So... ummm... I guess there are some things we need to talk about.”  Sheppard nervously rubbed his cheek with his hand as he shut his door.  His eyes darted about, looking everywhere but at Jack.

“We could talk.”  Jack responded as he stepped closer and took his friend’s chin in his hand.  He slowly turned Sheppard’s face until they were eye to eye.  “But, don’t feel that we have to.” 

Sheppard tried to look away, but when he couldn’t he whispered, “we don’t have to say anything at all.”   Impulsively, he grabbed Jack, pulling him into a long, slow kiss.


Author's Note #2:  Read Alien Donut Delight to find out what happens next....

Comments

[fandom-me.livejournal.com]

1-) GUH
2-) I so read doings as. Well, nevermind. It was dirty.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

well yeah.. but you know me.. fade to black and all

[fandom-me.livejournal.com]

It wasn't your fault! My brain just had a moment.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

but, is it too much, should I switch it?

[fandom-me.livejournal.com]

NO! it's FANTASTIC. (Dude, seriously, I read doings and dongs. It is not your fault I can't read.)

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

oh okay good. (You know me I worry over stupid stuff)

[fandom-me.livejournal.com]

*hugs you tight* I'm sorry, I shouldn't have said anything. I just had my brain shut ENTIRELY down.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

No, no, no. Always say. anything and everything.

[mad-jaks.livejournal.com]

Alien Donut Dongs????

*bites lip*
Oh that conjures up a visual!!!

[fandom-me.livejournal.com]

I AM SO SORRY.

[mad-jaks.livejournal.com]

Oh don't be! Though what with that and the tw100 ringtone drabble someone's posted I think I'll be hiccoughing all afternoon.

[rustydog.livejournal.com]

I'm surprised and happy to get to the kiss before the fade to black! I like the chin-holding and the eye-to-eye. The whole thing is frought with sexual tension.

Excellent!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

ooh, really? Thanks! I'm trying the follow-up now, but its fighting me.

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

I'll just be over here squeeing happily!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

squee is good! :)

[morgynleri]

Mmm. Yummy.

[phoenix64.livejournal.com]

*meep*

You packed loads of loveliness into those few sentences.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

I got a MEEP!!!! *eg*

[mad-jaks.livejournal.com]

“We could talk.” “But, don’t feel that we have to.”
Yeah John 'Show' don't 'Tell'

Have I missed one? Which one's nine?

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Alien Donut Détente (http://donutsweeper.livejournal.com/35854.html) is nine, maybe you did miss it, I know you saw 8 (Alien Donut Disquiet). Maybe the whole donut comm idea isn't a bad one.

btw- 11 will be up soonish