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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2007-12-01 09:59 am

Alien Donut Delight

Title: Alien Donut Delight
Pairing/Warning/Rating: Jack/John, none, rated PG (maybe PG-13?)
Word Count: 100
Summary: The kiss continues...
Author's Note:  TW/SGA crossover.  Eleventh in the alien donut crack!fic series.  Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] rustydog for the beta and encouragement!

The kiss started out soft. Not quite chaste, but gentle and sweet, and with an underlying passion to it.  Sheppard drew Jack closer, running his fingers through the other man’s hair.  It was softer than he’d imagined.  No, softer than he remembered.  As much as he tried to pretend otherwise, and despite the drugged donut haze,  he remembered every moment of that night they’d shared.  Why had he fought against this?  Pretended it hadn’t happened?

Sheppard paused momentarily before lightly nibbling Jack’s lower lip, asking for more, and entirely unsure where it would lead to, but rather enjoying the journey.


Author's Note #2:  Read Alien Donut Deliveries to find out what happens next....

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks!

go read if you're interested

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
What sort of silly question is that???

Jack's still being the perfect gent I see - awww.

Definitely shirtless I've just decided.
Makes for a much speedier -ah-'touchdown' at the end of their flight ;-)

Re: go read if you're interested

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
well, I thought I'd try being polite... And I'm all for a shirtless Jack *g*

[identity profile] rustydog.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Squee. It's just lovely! I really like that it's Shep initiating and asking, too.

And I'm totally embarrassed that I missed this, but you're missing an "en" in "happened."

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
In my mind, Jack's too much of a gentleman to have it happen any other way. Glad you liked it and thanks for the beta!

[identity profile] smithy161.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 09:01 pm (UTC)(link)
*Grin* you know I love this pairing, and this is utterly adorable.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks! my attempt at a *real* SGA/TW story went nowhere last night, but I did manage to put together this after you mentioned Jack/shep on that meme yesterday- so it's all YOUR fault!

[identity profile] smithy161.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Strangely enough, I'm happy to take the blame! Jack/Shep makes me go all wibbly *g*

Like your new layout, by the way! Very snazzy.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Some amazing person gifted me paid time and I'm playing around with customizing now. All bouncy and hyper about it.

One of these days I will manage to write Jack/Shep at something other than PG... one of these days

[identity profile] smithy161.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:14 pm (UTC)(link)
And on that day? I will come over there and marry you.

And what an awesome person! Was it anonymous? A friend bought me paid time recently, which was brilliant of her, but anonymous gifting must be like an unsigned valentines card. Or something.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:16 pm (UTC)(link)
yep, no idea who, I'm just... speechless and amazed and utterly weeping and bouncy at the thought of someone doing this for me!

And... you'd bring donuts, right?

[identity profile] smithy161.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, someone out there is brilliant.

And I would, quite naturally, bring a great big box of them!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:26 pm (UTC)(link)
oooh, you have a Good Omens icon!!!

[identity profile] smithy161.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I do! Love that book to bits. Literally. I've got two copies because my original one (bought about ten years ago o_o) has rather a lot of pages fallen out. And sellotaped back in. And fallen out again.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I love that "your car is on fire" scene, it's incredibly funny!

[identity profile] smithy161.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I mean, it's not the kind of thing you don't notice, your car being on fire...

The whole book still makes me grin. And I must have read it fifty times. Love the horsemen of the apocalypse, especially.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
they are hysterical!

Although my favorite of his books are the guards series

[identity profile] smithy161.livejournal.com 2007-12-02 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
Yup, they're my favourites too. I think Angua and Vimes are my favourite Discworld character, if I had to pick.

Also, love your new icons. Does [livejournal.com profile] jillicons not rule?

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-02 12:40 am (UTC)(link)
[livejournal.com profile] jillicons is amazing. I ♥ Vimes. He's just great

[identity profile] hellenebright.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww. Sweetness :]

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
*bounces* glad you liked!

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:43 pm (UTC)(link)
I've never really watched SGA but the way you write Sheppard is enough to make me want to change that, even if it's just to see how Jack would fit in there...

This is rather lovely btw.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-01 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
wow, you'd watch just because of these, that's wow, just such a compliment! I have no idea why I can see Jack fitting in there so well, *shrug* the mind does weird things sometimes (but you probably understand, having slipped Methos into TW so beautifully)

Glad you're enjoying them!
unfeathered: (JB method)

[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-12-02 12:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wow - hot stuff! Seriously, hot and sweet and beautiful and I reckon you should just keep going with this and see where it takes you... :-)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-02 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
aww thanks! I am learning!
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-12-02 03:25 pm (UTC)(link)
You certainly are! :-)

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/ 2007-12-03 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmm, nice! Love these last two! (Well, I love them all, actually, I'm just getting caught up is all. :))

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-03 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
Welcome back!! Glad you liked them! And look- I wrote a kissing scene!

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/ 2007-12-03 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
You did! A NICE kissing scene. (And I loved the chin-holding and the eye contact in the last one, too!)

...You have a Murray icon! Yay!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-03 01:55 am (UTC)(link)
[livejournal.com profile] rustydog made it for me! This one too! (Still bouncing for joy at actually managing these two alien donut drabbles!)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-03 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
I keep writing myself into corners though- where (and how)to take it from here!!

[identity profile] darthhellokitty.livejournal.com 2007-12-03 06:32 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwww...

And for you:
http://pics.livejournal.com/dcsunset44/pic/000b42t4

(box said to contain donuts)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-03 06:33 am (UTC)(link)
well.. donuts are the perfect way to someone's heart... no wonder about that big grin, right?