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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2008-03-10 09:45 pm

The More Things Change

Title: The More Things Change
Pairing/Rating/Warning: none, no spoilers, rated G
Word Count: 1308
Summary: One night Jack's wanderings aboard the TARDIS bring him face to face with a former traveler, Jamie
Beta: [profile] _medley_
Author's note: This story was written for the members of the evil prompters club, you know who you are.

When he first arrived he thought the TARDIS seemed endless: twisting passageways, halls turning in on themselves, and rooms that seem to spring up from nowhere. And the way the noises would echo; it was eerie. It wasn’t that she... it... the TARDIS? It wasn’t that Jack really thought that it - no - she was alive, but there were times when he wasn’t entirely sure that she wasn’t. She’d been the Doctor’s home for hundreds of years before Jack ever stepped foot inside and there were times when that history seemed to bleed through the walls. He’d think he’d heard laughter, but there was no one around. Once, he had awakened from a deep sleep when, in his dream, a young woman yelled for her grandfather; it was only a dream, wasn’t it? It had to be.

Occasionally, especially when he was tired, he would catch a flash of something out of the corner of his eye. A dangling scarf. Something metal gliding along the floor. A stalk of celery. Celery? A tartan. Once, when he walked into the control room he swore - for a split second there- the room was sterile and white, but in the time it took him to blink it was suddenly back to normal. Was he losing his mind? Or was it a trick of the TARDIS? Was she playing games with him?

Who else had walked these halls? What was the Doctor to them? What were they to the Doctor? What became of them?

It was late, not that time mattered aboard the TARDIS, but it was very late and Jack knew he should be in his bed, asleep. Or in someone’s bed, but he was walking the corridors. He was wandering, with no real destination in mind. He was tired, bone-weary, but he had to keep moving. The whispers were everywhere tonight. They wouldn’t let him be. She wouldn’t let him be.

Eyes closed, his pace slow, his hand glided along the wall. He’d give her this opportunity, let her take him where he was supposed to go, where she wanted him to go. Maybe she’d lead him somewhere, or maybe she’d finally leave him alone. Either one worked for him.

The noises were louder. If he opened his eyes what would he see? His TARDIS, with its comfortable coral, or that cold harsh one of the past? Where was he? When was he? Did it matter?

A voice grew distinct and separated out of the swirling whispers. A Scots accent. Male. A young man, younger than him, or more innocent anyway. Not that it mattered. For some reason that surprised Jack, but why? The Doctor had traveled with men before, hadn’t he? Of course he had, why wouldn’t he?

“What's the matter with the TARDIS, Doctor? It keeps going wrong all the time.”

The voice was muffled, the reply even more so. Jack stopped dead in his tracks. Running into an earlier, or later, version of the Doctor wouldn’t be a good idea. Future consequences and blah blah blah. He took a step back as voices from then cascaded around him, bouncing off walls, making him nauseous as time rippled and tore through him. Despite his eyes being closed he could see colors everywhere. Then the floor suddenly tilted under his feet and Jack was thrown against the wall.

The next thing Jack knew he was curled up on the floor. Over his pounding head he could barely make out the soft sound of footsteps approaching. He felt a hand on his forehead. “Doctor?”

“No. I can get him for you though. Stay here.” It was the Scots voice he heard earlier.

“Wait, don’t go.” Jack’s eyes flew open. “Who are you?”

“Jamie. Jamie McCrimmon. Who are you?”

Jack tried to focus on the boy. The man. The young man with brown hair falling in his eyes. “Jack.” He kept his answer simple. “Am I still on the TARDIS?”

“Aye.” If Jamie was concerned that a stranger was suddenly aboard the TARDIS he didn’t show it.

“Your TARDIS or mine?” He couldn’t tell, it looked like the halls he’d come to know so well, but when was he looking at them now?

“I’m afraid I don’t know what you mean.” Jamie looked concerned as Jack pushed himself to a sitting position, leaning against the wall for support. “I’m going to get the Doctor, he’ll want to know that we picked up a stowaway.”

“Not really a stowaway,” Jack corrected. “More of a stowawhen.”

“Sorry?” His kilt shifted as he knelt down next to Jack. A kilt, Jack thought, that explained the accent. Or maybe the accent explained the kilt...

“I take it you travel with the Doctor. I do too.” Jack rubbed the back of his neck, trying to organize his thoughts. “The same Doctor, but at different times in his life. We travel together in the TARDIS, and the TARDIS...”

“The TARDIS travels in time and space. It’s not always the most reliable of machines, especially when the Doctor flies it.” Jamie’s eyes were wide and solemn; Jack wondered what feelings for the Doctor were hiding behind them.

“Sometimes,” Jack admitted, keeping his voice low, “she doesn’t like the way the Doctor treats her. He acts like he knows what he’s doing but all these sparks will fly from the console...”

“Aye, and he gets mighty offended if you suggest things didn’t quite work the way he planned.” Then Jamie laughed, a beautiful sound, carefree in a way Jack hadn’t been in longer than he’d cared to admit.

“It doesn’t sound like he’s changed his ways much, then.” Jack didn’t laugh, but he did smile. And it wasn’t a ‘this con is going to work’ or ‘trust me I’m the Captain’ smile, but a real one.

“And, you’re saying you travel with the Doctor - just like I do - but in another time?”

“Exactly.” Dear God, was he ever that trusting? “Lately, I’ve heard... things, when walking the halls late at night. It’s like time was bleeding through, and I was experiencing things that slipped through the cracks from one TARDIS to another.”

Jamie just nodded, taking everything Jack was saying in stride, how the Doctor must have appreciated that in a traveling companion. “Jack?” Concern leached into his voice. “You don’t look well.”

“To be truthful,” not that being truthful was something he had a lot of experience with, “I’m not feeling that well.” Jack knew he was shivering, but he felt hot. And Jamie kept swimming in and out of focus.

“I should get the Doctor.” Jamie rested his hand on Jack’s shoulder. “You need help.”

“I won’t be here when you get back.” Jack grabbed onto Jamie’s hand for a moment, a port of cool confidence in the storm raging around him. “My timestream is slipping out of yours. I can feel it. Will you... will you keep an eye on your Doctor, for me? Try to keep him safe?”

“Of course!” The indignation said it all, the Doctor wouldn’t be harmed, not on Jamie’s watch.

“Thank you.” It was a whisper, but it took all the strength he had. He closed his eyes as nausea threatened to overwhelm him.

“Will you do the same for me?” Jamie sounded so sincere, so far away.

Jack wanted to answer, but he couldn’t open his mouth. So he quickly nodded, hoping Jamie could see, would know he’d do his best. He was so cold, and the colors were back, swirling every which way.

When the colors receded he sensed a figure next to him. “Jamie?” he rasped finally.

“Jack?” No Scots accent there, it was familiar, Northern. There was a rustle of leather and a hand on his back. “You alright?”

“Doctor?”

“Yeah, Jack. You with me?” Jack could hear the concern, and the smile, in his voice.

“Always, Doctor. Always.”




Author's Note#2: The line Jack overhears Jamie saying to the Doctor is from "The Invasion."

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/ 2008-03-11 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
You already know that I love this and want to snuggle it, but I'll say it again. I especially love the things Jack sees, and Jamie's indignation over the idea that he might not keep the Doctor safe.

You know, if you keep writing things like this, you're not discouraging [livejournal.com profile] mad_jaks and I from pestering you at ALL. *eg*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
Like I could ever put a stop to that... :)

It was fun to come up with a random list of OldSchool things for Jack to see!

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 08:12 am (UTC)(link)
Quick let us huddle in that corner over there and figure out what we can torment her with next!

Jack/Logan Cale gets my vote, what say you? *sniggers*

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:30 pm (UTC)(link)
*assumes look of total innocence*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
*taps foot*

that doesn't work on you, you know

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:36 pm (UTC)(link)
*runs away before the prompting can start*

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2008-03-13 01:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I want Jack/Harry Dresden or even Bob/Myfanwy... More so now I'm on the 4th novel, which is all your fault you know!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-13 02:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I might write more Jack in Dresden Files later- that one is a lot harder for me. I hope you're liking the books though!

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2008-03-13 03:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I love the books, but I do feel really sorry for Harry. He needs something good to happen to him, and I can't think of anything better than Jack...

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/ 2008-03-11 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I still want Jack/Illya/Napoleon, but I don't think she's seen the show...

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 04:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm guessing "Man from UNCLE" but I've never seen the show.

*Phew* dodged a bullet there

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/ 2008-03-11 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
*sigh* I'm going to have to finish the one I started, aren't I?

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 08:57 pm (UTC)(link)
YES!!!

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
This must be remedied at all costs!!
Jack/Illya/Napoleon would be awesome.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/ 2008-03-11 04:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Wouldn't it? I started one, but it didn't go anywhere.

[identity profile] kensieg.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 04:04 pm (UTC)(link)
she's posted that story already.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
I wrote it due to their evil promptings here and elsewhere though

[identity profile] taffimai.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
*scolds* Bad TARDIS!!!

Lovely story, hon.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
:) thanks!

[identity profile] taffimai.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
Occurs to me that I was negligent in not using the correct icon to comment on this story. Bad me!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
Oh that's excellent!
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[personal profile] clocketpatch 2008-03-11 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
Jamie! *does happy dance*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you like it!

I know who I am *g*

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 08:09 am (UTC)(link)
What a totally beauterrific thing to wake up to YOU DARLING, you did it and it was gorgeous Loved it to pieces

carefree in a way Jack hadn’t been in longer than he’d cared to admit
This just got me and all those little pieces that emphasise just how much Jack knows he isn't like Jamie anymore? Tug at my poor old heartstrings.

And then that they were both needing the other to look after 'their' Doctor? Perfect.

Also? You got them there totally believably - don't know what you were worrying about *smooches*

And I'll shut up now

Re: I know who I am *g*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
*bounces with you* I'm glad it worked, but I still think you're evil. :)

Re: I know who I am *g*

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
*flutters*
Did I ever say I wasn't??

Re: I know who I am *g*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
good point.

*ha* just saw your icon post. Embracing your evil side, hmm?

Re: I know who I am *g*

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes yes *nods a lot*

I blame you and Melody of course - I was a good little girl till I met you - never a thought of corruption of any kind crossed my angelic little brain :D

Re: I know who I am *g*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oddly enough, I have difficulty believing that. How can I be to blame for you being evil to me?

Re: I know who I am *g*

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Well I didn't know I was being evil by encouraging you to write donut!fic but then I kind of got this label. And it was all downhill after that:D

Re: I know who I am *g*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* 'tis a slippery slope

[identity profile] ziggychaos.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 12:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Nicely done. Thanks for sharing!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:34 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks for commenting! :)
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2008-03-11 01:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, that's lovely. I'm not sure if I've ever seen Jamie in anything other than pictures, but this is a lovely story. And I love Jack's close connection with the TARDIS too. :-)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 02:35 pm (UTC)(link)
It's a crime that so many Jamie/Two adventures were destroyed. Luckily there are a few out there, you should look for them "The Invasion" is the introduction of UNIT and another good one is "The Tomb of the Cybermen" and I think there might be a few othes.

[identity profile] laurab1.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely :)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 03:15 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you!

[identity profile] topaz-eyes.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, what a brilliant idea! Lovely.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! :)
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[personal profile] tree_and_leaf 2008-03-11 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
That was gorgeous.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-11 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much! :)

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2008-03-13 01:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh this is lovely. I adore all the classic references too, pity you couldn't fit a baseball bat in there... *g*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-13 02:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I thought about it, but the bat is metal and I already had metal in my description of K-9.

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2008-03-13 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
True, I forgot about that. And anyway, I frellin love the Tin Dog! The celery was cool too...

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-13 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
originally I was going to have something from every Doctor (or from a companion with each Doctor) so the Tartan was for Two, the scarf=four, etc- I was going to have yellow wellingtons for Three (Sarah Jane's boots) and Seven's ? umbrella... but it just got too long and silly.