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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2008-03-30 09:15 pm
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A Stolen Moment

Title: A Stolen Moment
Pairing/Warning/Rating: Surprise pairing, PWP, rated NC-17
Word Count: 100
Beta: [profile] _medley_
Summary: Two members of the Torchwood team steal a moment together
Author's Note: written for the [community profile] tw100   challenge:kink

Slowly, far too slowly, his tongue runs up her spine. She feels, more than hears, his throaty laugh as she squirms under his ministrations. Caught in the moment, he gathers her shirt in his fist, pinning her arms with it above her head. Pressed against the wall, his weight against hers, she can’t move, the brick scratching her nipples as he starts to fuck her, fast and hard.

“One of these days we’re going to get caught,” she says.

“I don’t care,” he replies, breathless, muffled by her hair. “You’re worth it, Tosh.”

“So are you, Ianto. So are you.”

[identity profile] aeron-lanart.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 11:42 am (UTC)(link)
Shirt in fist half pulled off, trapping arms. That's how I see it anyway... *grabs fan*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 02:27 pm (UTC)(link)
exactly what I was trying to have happen! :)

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
er sweetie you might want to swap those few words round
from pinning it with her arms
to pinning her arms with it

I read it how you meant it but it's not what you actually wrote ♥

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 03:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I thought it worked both ways, but if it reads better than way than I'll change it

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
The first is, logically, pinning shirt with arms.
The second is unmistakably arms pinned with shirt.
*sends donuts*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
logic is overrated. But donuts are appreciated!

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Logic is often overrated - and it was still an awesome image - Ianto was totally 'in the moment' and she was loving it.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 03:49 pm (UTC)(link)
so many comments that could be made in response to that....

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Now:

Should I flutter my eyes innocently?

OR

*smirk* ??

[identity profile] itsarift-thing.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my poor, confused face :s

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-03-31 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
confusion is good. run with it