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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2008-06-15 11:01 pm
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Smoky Confrontations

Title: Smoky Confrontations
Pairing/Warning/Rating: NCIS fandom, No pairings, rated G
Word Count: 900 (3x300)
Summary:  A fire leads to confrontations between Gibbs and Tony
Author's Note: Written for the [profile] ncisdrabble100  challenge: Fire

Gibbs groaned, opening his eyes. "Where's DiNozzo?"

"You really should lay still, Boss." McGee, hunkered down next to Gibbs, couldn't quite meet the other man's glare.

"I'm going to kill him. He went back in, didn't he?" Gibbs gestured at the warehouse that was practically engulfed in flames. "You let him?"

"I was pulling up as he carried you out. He ran back in before I could even get out my phone to call 911.” McGee shrugged. “I think he went after Simmons."

"Ya think?" There was a siren in the distance. "How long was I unconscious?"

"Not long. A minute? Maybe two?" McGee pulled up his jacket so it covered his head. "Ziva's on her way; now that you're awake I'm going after Tony."

He got to his feet and ran towards the building, only to have the door fly open as he approached. Thick, acrid smoke billowed out, followed almost immediately by a stumbling form.

“DiNozzo!” Gibbs shouted as Tony fell to his knees a few feet from the door. “Damn it!”

“Sorry Boss, I... had to... the lieutenant...” Tony gasped in-between coughs, “I couldn’t just...”

McGee was already at Tony’s side, helping him slip Simmons off his shoulder and onto the ground. “Tony?” he asked, eying the other man nervously.

“How is he?” Gibbs carefully got to his feet.

“Pulse is strong, seems okay.”

“Not Simmons,” Gibbs head slapped McGee lightly as he walked by, “DiNozzo.”

McGee muttered a quiet, “Right. Sorry Boss.”

“Tony?” Gibbs crouched down next to Tony who was still on his knees, his sides heaving, struggling to breathe. “Slow breaths, try to relax. The ambulance is almost here.”

“M’fine,” Tony managed, coughing harshly.

“Yeah, I can see that,” Gibbs responded dryly, pretending not to notice when Tony leaned into him for support. “Just fine.”



Tony cracked an eye open, confirming his suspicion; Gibbs was leaning against the wall, glaring at him. “Boss,” he croaked, reaching up to pull the oxygen mask off, “I had to go after him....”

“DiNozzo,” Gibbs warned, his voice low and firm, “what did I say about touching that mask?”

He dropped his hand instantly and sighed dejectedly before answering, “leave it on until the doctor clears me. But I’m fine Boss, haven’t coughed in ages.”

“Try three minutes. You inhaled a lot of smoke. And remember what happened the last time you told me you were fine? You passed out.”

“Did not.”

“Did too.”

“Not.”

“You really are five, aren’t you?” Gibbs checked the tubing and oxygen flow. “DiNozzo, you are not leaving this ER until you get a clean bill of health. You will not sign yourself out AMA. You will not lie about your symptoms. You will let them bandage those burns properly. You will let them do whatever tests they think are necessary and you will take whatever medications they give you. Are we clear on that?”

“Crystal.” Tony looked around for a moment. “So, Boss, why am I the only one getting checked out here?”

“Because you’re the only one who passed out when the paramedics arrived.”

“I did not pass out, I got dizzy. You were the one who passed out.”

“I was knocked out, and I’m fine now.”

“You might have a concussion. If I have to get checked out you do too.”

“Since when have you had the mistaken impression that you could order me around?”

“Since Ducky will be here any minute and if you don’t get a doctor to look at your head I’ll make sure he finds out about it?”

Gibbs’ eyes narrowed. “Are you threatening me?”

“Me? Never.”



“I thought you said you’d take my back to my place?” Tony looked morosely out the window as they approached Gibbs’ house.

“No, I told the doctor I’d drive you home. I just didn’t specify whose home. Not my fault if you misinterpreted my statement.”

“Gibbs.” It was almost an accusation, but there was no heat behind it.

“You’re the one who insisted on getting out of there.”

Tony didn’t say anything else until they were inside and Gibbs was helping him out of his jacket so it wouldn't catch on the bandages. “I hate hospitals,” he admitted quietly.

Gibbs sighed, replying the same way he always did, “I know.”

“So, I take it I’m renting your spare room for the night?”

“Dinozzo, you heard Ducky, he was worried-”

“About my lungs, yeah, I know! I’m not the man I used to be.” Tony pulled away from Gibbs, the jacket falling on the floor between them. “I had the plague. My lung capacity’s diminished and I shouldn’t have inhaled all that smoke. But what was I suppose to do, let Simmons burn to death?” Tony spun around to face Gibbs, poking him hard in the chest.

Gibbs didn’t flinch. “You did what you had to do. Bad lungs or not, there’s no way you would have let anyone burn if you could prevent it.” He reached out and clutched Tony’s arm. “Tony, listen to me, you are no less of an agent, no less of a man, today than you were before that damned plague. What you did today, getting me out and then going back for Simmons? Maybe half a dozen agents I’ve ever worked with could have done that.” He tapped Tony under the chin. “Now go shower. You stink.”

Tony smiled. “Thanks, Boss.”

“No, Tony, thank you.”

[identity profile] mylogiceatsyou.livejournal.com 2008-06-16 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Awesome, and very in character. Gibbs showing his concern without actually saying it, as such.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-06-16 02:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Glad you liked it! :)
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[personal profile] kaylashay81 2008-06-16 05:52 am (UTC)(link)
Aww... I love Gibbs in his unique mother-hen mode with Tony. :-)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-06-16 02:11 pm (UTC)(link)
I just adore Gibbs when he mother-hens. Although, I'm not sure Tony does. :)

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2008-06-16 07:31 am (UTC)(link)
OMG there were moments in those first two sections I just want to flail over because OMG there is Gibbs love going on up there like nobody's business!! Actually I want to flail about the whole thing

*FLAILS LOUDLY & HAPPILY*


polishes your diamond: it would catch - I think you meant it wouldn't, otherwise that's just a bit mean...

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-06-16 02:14 pm (UTC)(link)
oops, good catch, whoopsie!

Yay! *Flails with you*

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[identity profile] chatona.livejournal.com 2008-06-16 09:10 am (UTC)(link)
That-- you--- I---- *flails*

OMG, that was just perfect and wonderful and I love it and it's IC and wonderful and did I mention perfect and that I love it and that it's perfect? *squees*

♥♥♥

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-06-16 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
You are the best kind of audience! *hugs* Glad you liked!

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[identity profile] puck23.livejournal.com 2008-06-16 11:09 am (UTC)(link)
Would you mind if I squee a little bit before telling you what a wonderfull job you did?

squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

wow, tony hurt/gibbs comfort. you story rocks!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-06-16 02:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Squee is the *best* kind of reaction out there! Glad you liked! :)

[identity profile] the-dark-side.livejournal.com 2008-06-17 01:40 am (UTC)(link)
Awww. This is just what I needed, today.

[identity profile] kayleyangel.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
lovely fics as always!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-06-19 02:50 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

[identity profile] hunterwithcause.livejournal.com 2008-07-13 12:47 pm (UTC)(link)
*has no words*

♥ ♥ ♥

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-07-13 03:34 pm (UTC)(link)
*very big grin* Thanks

[identity profile] philleegirl.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
AW! I loved that! Thank you for linking this for me. It was wonderful and so believable.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-08-21 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
*blushes* thanks! :)

[identity profile] pureevil230.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 03:36 pm (UTC)(link)
that's so tony always trying to save ppl. he deserves that reward sheppard was always trying to pass off on gibbs...maybe one day he'll actually get it for him and not just cuz gibbs didn't show up so it'll be another award for the medal box like the newest episode was (6x06)where vance tried to give gibbs the medal but tony once again had to accept it for him.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I totally agree- Tony should get honored for all his work in his own right. :) Glad you liked this

[identity profile] fredsmith518.livejournal.com 2008-11-30 05:45 pm (UTC)(link)
enjoyed reading this

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-11-30 05:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it! :)

[identity profile] karababe-64.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 02:12 pm (UTC)(link)
I was re-reading this for the third or fourth time and realised that I should tell you how much I enjoy it. And how it always reminds of when I first realised that I like hurt/comfort/Whump stories - years ago reading a Hardy Boys book where one of the boys suffers from smoke inhalation.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much more dropping me a note to tell me how much you liked this!

[identity profile] kateri-e.livejournal.com 2009-04-19 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmm, I somehow seem to have missed telling you in the past how awesome this story is.

This story is awesome ;-)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2009-04-20 03:23 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much!

[identity profile] little-ozzo.livejournal.com 2009-08-22 08:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Just to officially let you know: I love this! Snarky, concerned Gibbs and competent, heroic, out-of-breath Tony! You've pretty much pressed all my favourite buttons with this, and I love it.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2009-08-22 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
*g* Yay! Glad it worked so well for you!

[identity profile] etrangerici.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 04:36 pm (UTC)(link)
This is great. I especially like DiNozzo's threat. Gibbs going all protective is always a win.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2009-12-02 05:46 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you! I'm glad you liked it!