Trapped

[donutsweeper]

Title: Trapped
Pairing/Rating/Warning: Jack/Nine, rated G
Word Count: 148
Summary: Jack and the Doctor are trapped in an elevator
Author's Note: Written for smithy161 and _medley_ who supplied the prompt.

“Maybe if we...”

“Nope.”

“Well, what about...”

“Tried that.”

“We could always...”

“Only if you want to blow us up.”

“Are you going to let me finish a sentence here, Doctor?”

“Not when I know what you’re going to say, Jack.”

“Then how, pray tell, are you planning on getting us out of this blasted elevator?” 

“Like I told Rose the night we met you, psychology!”

“You do realize you make me nervous when you grin like that.”

“I thought you liked my grin?”

“I do like your grin but I... Erg!  Doctor!!  We need to focus!  Can you get us out of this damned elevator or not?”

“You humans, always rushing about... what’s wrong with being stuck in a lift?  Or, excuse me, an elevator.  Lots of things you can do in an elevator.”

“Oh yeah?  Name one.”

“How ‘bout I show you?”

“Show?  Doctor, I... oohh.....”

Comments

[http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/]

“Are you going to let me finish a sentence here, Doctor?”
“Not when I know what you’re going to say, Jack.”

Hee! Love that, and love this fic! Thank you! I'm glad Smithy thought of it and I seconded it. *g*

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Hey, if I can't be creative enough to come up with fic ideas I'm stealing all the ones you guys throw at me and running with them! Although I'm being to think my LJ needs a crack!fic/humor warning!

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

Oohh! Ending it there is cruel! But brilliant, as always.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

(I can't write slash) but glad you liked!

[hellenebright.livejournal.com]

Ooo-er missus!

Great fic

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :)

[unfeathered]

Oh, lovely. You're very good at these dialogue-only stories!

Loved "Or, excuse me, an elevator." Very Nine. Could really him saying that line. :-)

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

I like dialogue only- I can't mess up the punctuation tags! :) Yay!!! Thanks!

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

lol Cute, thanks.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

glad you liked! :)

[imortalitybites.livejournal.com]

Haha brilliant!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

thanks!

[whosrose.livejournal.com]

This is delightful! Do you have any more?

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

nope! that's it, for the moment anyway. plenty of silly, light crack!fic though

[irener.livejournal.com]

Eh, people do approach Jack with a phrase starting like Lots of things you can do with [whatever is at hand]. Mostly hot people, that is noticed too.
Lovely fic!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

glad you liked!

[rustydog.livejournal.com]

"Psychology"! Great. :) I can just see Nine saying this.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

I loved Nine so much, I'm glad you thought I did him justice here! :)

[laurab1.livejournal.com]

Ha! Brilliant :)

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[fajrdrako.livejournal.com]

I like this kind of 'trapped in an elevator' story. I think the Doctor likes it too. Lucky Jack!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

you may have stumbled upon the reason the Doctor didn't try too hard to get them out of the elevator...

[mad-jaks.livejournal.com]

“You do realize you make me nervous when you grin like that.”
That's not nervous Jack that's PST (pre-sexual tension) I'd have expected you to recognise it by now :D

Great work as always

Did I know you'd written a follow up tot he squirrel thing for bringthehappy??

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I love Nine's grin! and umm... Murray is back (http://donutsweeper.livejournal.com/21525.html)so go read it if you haven't yet

[redwolfoz.livejournal.com]

Which is usually the moment when the lift decides to get unstuck, damn it. Well done!

[karaokegal.livejournal.com]

Cue Aerosmith! Very cute.

[bigeyedrabbit.livejournal.com]

VA VA VA VOOM! Nine, you saucy minx!