Alien Donut Disquiet

[donutsweeper]

Title: Alien Donut Disquiet
Pairing/Warning/Rating: Jack/John, none, rated PG
Word Count: 100
Summary: John can't avoid Jack any longer...
Author's Note:  TW/SGA crossover.  Eighth in alien donut crack!fic series.

Jack lay there, dead.  As he had for the last three hours. 

"Damnit, Jack.”  Sheppard grabbed the limp hand.  “The others will be back soon with the jumper but I am not returning to Atlantis until you’re alive.”  Since that incident with the donuts two months ago he’d been distant and cold towards Jack, but Jack still threw himself in front of a laser to save him, without a moment’s hesitation.  “You deserved better from me.”  Impulsively, Sheppard leaned forward and kissed Jack; he wasn’t sure which of them was more surprised when Jack took that moment to wake up.


Author's Note #2:  Read Alien Donut Détente to find out what happens next....

Comments

[awanderingbard.livejournal.com]

Jack lay there, dead. As he had for the last three hours.

I cannot describe to you how much I love that line. It says so much. It's sad, it's funny, it's true. Anything you put after that would have made me happy. You totally had me hooked. Plus, the rest was sweet and wonderful. Um...yeah. You rock. Sorry for the weird rant. :D

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

those are the kinds of rants I love. Its just the perfect feedback for an author! Glad you liked it!