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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2007-11-28 08:53 pm
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The Birthday Memory

Title: The Birthday Memory
Pairing/Warning/Rating: none, rated G
Word Count: 100
Summary: Someone special in Jack's life is having a birthday
Author's Note:  Written for the Guilty Pleasures Fest for the prompt "one memory I don't want to lose"


She was five and wearing a blue and green polka dotted skirt, red and black striped socks and pink shirt with bunnies stitched on it.  A complete sartorial nightmare, but absolutely perfect in every way that mattered.  When she saw him she threw herself into his arms. “Uncle Jack!  You’re here!  Now it’s my bestest birthday ever!”

He hugged her tight; she smelled like bubble gum and sunshine.  “Course I’m here, Kiddo.  I wouldn’t have missed it for the world!”  He closed his eyes, trying to burn the moment into his mind.  “Wait till you see what I got you!”

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/ 2007-11-29 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, that's adorable and sweet and touching.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
*blushes* thanks!

[identity profile] fandom-me.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's just perfect - and Jack sounds so much like Jack. Also, that outfit's just priceless.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! :)

Oh, and my daughter's favorite outfit at that age was the inspiration for that.

[identity profile] rustydog.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 08:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I wondered when I read it if there was a real-life inspiration for the outfit.

I will add to the chorus of "Awwwww." Seriously sweet, and I really can imagine Jack that way.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 08:24 pm (UTC)(link)
My daughter outfit's was worse, because she also had a checkered vest and sparkly shoes and a cowboy hat. *sigh* those were the days.

Glad you liked it!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 03:55 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked!

[identity profile] taffimai.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
Awww, Jack + kiddies = utter cuteness.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
thanks! :)

[identity profile] secbeth.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
*heart warms* AWWW

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you liked it! :)

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
what a great reaction, glad you liked it!

[identity profile] matsujo9.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 04:52 am (UTC)(link)
It was sweet and I could totally see Jack saying those things.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
I know it's weird, but I can totally picture Jack with kids, not as a dad mind you, but as that super-cool uncle who sweeps into their lives every so often

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 05:23 am (UTC)(link)
*phew* I'm not insane. Although you're icon was highly appropriate!

[identity profile] matsujo9.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 05:24 am (UTC)(link)
I always forget to see which one this randomizer picks!

[identity profile] larielromeniel.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 05:06 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that's just too sweet!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 05:07 am (UTC)(link)
:) thanks!
unfeathered: (Jack Lick Here)

[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-11-29 11:34 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that is so cute! I want an Uncle Jack! *g*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Who doesn't? Thanks! :)

[identity profile] ayankha.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 01:56 pm (UTC)(link)
awe!!!! kawaii!!!!!!! oddly enough, i can see Jack as a dad, but that's just my own personal plot bunny.... but Jack+kids is a great combo that def needs to be explored more....

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-29 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Jack+kids= aww factor x 100. Glad you liked it!

[identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com 2007-11-30 04:45 pm (UTC)(link)
AWWW Cute

*pets your guilt*

I obviously got sidetracked by conversations about alcohol yesterday when I came to read *aplogises*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-11-30 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
well, I figured alien donuts couldn't be a guilty pleasure anymore (not after 16 drabbles of them) so utter sappiness won out. Glad you liked!

[identity profile] ktswaz.livejournal.com 2007-12-04 08:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Whose kid? Doctor/Rose? Gwen? Dare I hope Tosh?

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-04 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)
it's up to the reader to decide who the child is! :)

[identity profile] ktswaz.livejournal.com 2007-12-04 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Oi! That's not good! My mind is going crazy!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-12-04 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
bwhahahahaha. {insert evil laugh here}