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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2007-09-05 12:05 am
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Taking What's Mine

Title: Taking What's Mine
Word Count: 100
Pairing/Rating/Warning:  The Master/Jack, rated R, spoilers for "Last of the Time Lords"
Summary:  The Master, Jack, and a lesson during the year that never was.

He is naked.  His muscles ripple, straining against the chains.  I slide my hand over those lovely pectorals and then trace those tight abs.  As my fingers slip down further he raises his head.  His eyes betray him, pleading silently, begging me to stop.  But he never makes a sound.

I can’t help but laugh as I slip behind him to take what is mine, again and again, thrusting to the beat of the drums until he passes out from the pain.

Oh well.  There’s always tomorrow.  He'll enjoy it eventually.  We’ll have such fun then.

Bonne nuit, mon Capitaine.

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-05 05:48 am (UTC)(link)
Nice to know I'm in such good company then!

[identity profile] fandom-me.livejournal.com 2007-09-05 05:50 am (UTC)(link)
I have a dream, that someday I will post something and no one will find errors. I figure another year or ten >.< *clings to you*

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2007-09-05 05:52 am (UTC)(link)
Add in Captain Jack feeding us donuts while fanning us and I think we'd be in heaven then.
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-09-05 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I couldn't find any errors in your drabble this morning.

I looked really hard, too!

*g*

[identity profile] fandom-me.livejournal.com 2007-09-05 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
HA! *marks it on the freaking calendar and has a cupcake to celebrate*
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-09-05 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
There have been others with no errors too. If you look back through your comments you will find them. They're the ones where I haven't mentioned any *g*

Like most of us, you're fine on the short things. It's just the longer things, where you've played around with the text, that tend to have errors :-)

[identity profile] fandom-me.livejournal.com 2007-09-05 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I'm just about to send out a longer thing for a first look over, and then a second look over and do you want it, too, or are you up to your nose with other stuff - and either one's fine, I just dont' want to nag at you.
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-09-05 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I want it I want it! Don't leave me out!!!

I have no more rehearsals now for a whole week, so I should have the next few evenings free. And I've given myself a day off writing and I'm getting on with Donut's thing instead, so I should be available tomorrow evening and there onwards.

Send it over whenever :-)

[identity profile] fandom-me.livejournal.com 2007-09-05 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
OK! I'll get it through Medley early reading and Karen doing edits and then pop it off to you to catch the rest!
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[personal profile] unfeathered 2007-09-05 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Cool :-)