Beautiful Brides

[donutsweeper]

Title: Beautiful Brides
Pairing/Warning/Rating: no spoilers, rated G
Word Count: 100
Summary: Jack compliments a bride
Author's Note: Un-betaed.  Written for itinerant_vae's comment comment fest from the prompt - Torchwood. Jack, Gwen - giving the bride away, friendship fic.

“You’re beautiful.”  He leaned over, placing a kiss on her forehead.

“Every bride is beautiful on their wedding day, Jack,”  she replied.

“Having seen a lot of brides,  I can honestly tell you that’s not always true.”

“Really?  What about Mom and Gran?”

“Your mom looked like an angel.  And your grandmother...” 

“What about me?”

“Gwen!” Jack whirled around in surprise.  “You were so beautiful you took my breath away.”

She thwacked him lightly.  “Always the flirt, aren’t you?”

“You wouldn’t have it any other way.”  He offered his arm.  “May I escort you to your seat?”

“I’d be delighted.”

Comments

[matsujo9.livejournal.com]

Awwwww.

[becky-writing.livejournal.com]

AW! *MELTS*

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

*g* thanks!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Yay! Glad you liked it, thanks for the prompt!

[becky-writing.livejournal.com]

It's been rattling around my head, and I could never have managed to do it justice the way you did. Thank YOU for writing it.

[kensieg.livejournal.com]

lovely story!

Don't you mean: "Every bride is beautiful on her wedding day?"

[http://users.livejournal.com/_medley_/]

Aww, that's adorable and sweet. ♥

[shadowhwk.livejournal.com]

AWWW! Yay for future!Gwen still being friends with Jack.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

hmmm, not sure. I think both work.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

:) thanks!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

*g* glad you liked it!

[kensieg.livejournal.com]

ok.

[cjedwards.livejournal.com]

Aw. That's so sweet!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

thank you!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

*blushes mightily*

[morgynleri]

Ooo! *bookmarks story* I like it!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

*blushes* Thank you!

[unfeathered]

Awww, that's so sweet! :-)

Punctuation correction: “Every bride is beautiful on their wedding day, Jack.” She replied. - Jack," she replied.

[jadesfire2808.livejournal.com]

Bless! Really nicely done.

[mad-jaks.livejournal.com]

I do like the idea that they're still functioning like an extended family. Nice :D

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

I hate punctuation tags! Thanks!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

thank you :)

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

*g* Glad you liked it!

[joonscribble.livejournal.com]

Aw, a lovely fic! It's brief, but that hardly matters as so much feeling, friendship and just the sensation of *history* resides in this. Wonderful!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

thank you! When dealing with prompts I like to keep things short and simple, glad it worked here for you! :)