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donutsweeper ([personal profile] donutsweeper) wrote2008-01-24 08:21 pm
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Beautiful Brides

Title: Beautiful Brides
Pairing/Warning/Rating: no spoilers, rated G
Word Count: 100
Summary: Jack compliments a bride
Author's Note: Un-betaed.  Written for [profile] itinerant_vae's comment comment fest from the prompt - Torchwood. Jack, Gwen - giving the bride away, friendship fic.

“You’re beautiful.”  He leaned over, placing a kiss on her forehead.

“Every bride is beautiful on their wedding day, Jack,”  she replied.

“Having seen a lot of brides,  I can honestly tell you that’s not always true.”

“Really?  What about Mom and Gran?”

“Your mom looked like an angel.  And your grandmother...” 

“What about me?”

“Gwen!” Jack whirled around in surprise.  “You were so beautiful you took my breath away.”

She thwacked him lightly.  “Always the flirt, aren’t you?”

“You wouldn’t have it any other way.”  He offered his arm.  “May I escort you to your seat?”

“I’d be delighted.”

[identity profile] joonscribble.livejournal.com 2008-01-28 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, a lovely fic! It's brief, but that hardly matters as so much feeling, friendship and just the sensation of *history* resides in this. Wonderful!

[identity profile] donutsweeper.livejournal.com 2008-01-28 03:45 am (UTC)(link)
thank you! When dealing with prompts I like to keep things short and simple, glad it worked here for you! :)