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[donutsweeper]

Jack?  Please shut up.  You're supposed to be in a tale of intrigue and aliens, not having tea with a giggling four year old.  Remember the mystery?  The reason this whole stupid story is being written in the first place?  Do you think you can address that part sometime this century?

Plot=hard.  Tea and crumpets=fun.  *sigh*

Comments

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

...You're really bad for my teeth, you know that?

*Hunts for chocolate*

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

so I should start posting about toothbrushes now?

*ponders* not quite as interesting or as much fun

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

*g* I wouldn't actually change you for anything. Although my dentist would. If I ever went to one.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

going to dentists is important (not that I can talk, I haven't been in ages)

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

I have a fundamental dislike of people who take money off me and then cause me pain.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

lol- good point there.

ugh- this tea party and it's randomness is nearly 1000 words now!

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

That's fine! It sounds fun.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

have to read the lead up yet? I'd love any feedback/opinions on what worked or needed tightening or tweaking, etc

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

It's on my 'stuff to do asap' list! Once this last bloody exam is out of the way, I'll have more time to read.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

no worries. and no rush. I'm pushing myself to write it now, because I'm afraid it'll get horribly Jossed by S2