donutsweeper (
donutsweeper) wrote2008-01-14 01:21 pm
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Jack? Please shut up. You're supposed to be in a tale of intrigue and aliens, not having tea with a giggling four year old. Remember the mystery? The reason this whole stupid story is being written in the first place? Do you think you can address that part sometime this century?
Plot=hard. Tea and crumpets=fun. *sigh*
Plot=hard. Tea and crumpets=fun. *sigh*

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You can always cut that part out later if it's not working.
that's just excellent advice, especially since this is for
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If it helps, think of 'real' novels - there's always dead ends and bits of fun to help ease the drama or taunt the reader a bit. So, let Jack have his tea (especially since it sounds sooo adorable!) and things will work out alright in the end.
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