Forced Forgiveness

[donutsweeper]

Title: Forced Forgiveness
Pairing/Rating/Warning: NCIS fandom, Gibbs/DiNozzo,  spoilers for "Hiatus", rated R
Word Count: 200
Summary:  DiNozzo is going to forgive Gibbs, no matter what.  Gibbs will make sure of that.
Author's Note: Written for the slashthedrabble challenge, forgiven

I admit it.  I screwed up.  I quit, probably in the gruffest, most painful way possible.  I said “You’ll do,” handed him my badge and gun and left him standing there, looking like I’d just punched him in the gut.

I should have said goodbye.  I should have said thank you.  I should have told him he was a good agent, that he was my friend, my lover and given him the respect and trust he always gave me.

But I didn’t.

I’m back now, but he doesn’t look at me way that he used to.  His eyes are cold and distant, his tone clipped and careful.  He acts like there was never anything between us but the job.  Every interaction is terribly professional now.  And I can’t find the words to make things right.

But I was never one for words. 

So I fall back to what I am good at.  Actions.  I’ll make him understand why I did what I did.  And why he needs to forgive me.  I look down at him; naked and tied to the bed, the sleeping pill I slipped him starting to wear off.  It’ll take some work, but he’ll be mine again.

Comments

[kaylashay81]

Wow. You packed a punch in 200 words. I'm curious as to what kind of response Tony will have when he wakes up... especially if they didn't do tying up before Gibbs left...

I don't know if I want Tony to forgive this Gibbs... hmmm... it's a toughie..

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I'll have to admit I'm not sure where this would go next.

[chatona.livejournal.com]

... You! *dies* *re-reads* *dies again*

Uhm. I'm speechless. I mean. Wow. Fuck. I... don't know if I want to cheer Gibbs on or knock him out. Probably the latter. He is a bastard.

Awh, damn it. Poor Tony. The Tony in my head is wincing in sympathy, by the way and he's also slightly turned on, but he's not admitting it.

So, uhm, yeah. Still sorta speechless. But, wow, i mean. That was one hell of a punch. I didn't expect that.

It's not something the Gibbs in my head would ever do, but I think that doesn't make it ooc at all - it's just a different interpretation and it works scarily well *whimpers*

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

The second B is for Bastard afterall... glad this works for you, even if it's not in line with your version of Gibbs!

[chatona.livejournal.com]

Yeah, it definitely is. God. I decided I want to hit him over the head instead of cheering him on. He deserves it.

And, well. It doesn't have to be my version of Gibbs to work or be ic, does it? :D

[gibozzo.livejournal.com]

Wow!!
That was incredible!
It made me feel all weird inside and I don't know if it's in a good way or a bad way!
Loved it.
Well done.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Thank you- it's supposed to leave that sort of an impression.

I love your icon.

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Oh wow. Very powerful.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

glad you liked it

[darkhavens.livejournal.com]

A determined Gibbs is a wonder to behold. Also skeery. *g*

Loved it!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

That he is. Thanks!

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

Ooh. I love it when you spring dark!fic on us. And even though I don't know the programme, this still packs a punch. Ouch!

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Thank you! This is DiNozzo btw *points to icon*

[smithy161.livejournal.com]

He looks... brooding! He's the one being tied up, right?

[mad-jaks.livejournal.com]

he doesn’t look at me way that he used to
OUCH poor Gibbs...

The sleeping pill concerns me somewhat but I'm sure they can *work* that one out too ♥

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

there will be a lot of *working* between those two

[a-phoenixdragon.livejournal.com]

Oh wow!! Fantastically done!!

*hugs*

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[amanda-is-wacky.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow. Erm, I totally hadn't been expecting that last paragraph to go that way! I'm not entirely sure that's the way to try to win some's forgiveness! lol

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

probably not, but Gibbs was always one to go the extra mile!

[jo1968.livejournal.com]

Probably why he's been whacked in the head with a baseball bat and a golf club!

[jo1968.livejournal.com]

I wanted to smack Gibbs in the head for the way that he left like he did, and then to just come back and take over again. He sure lives up the the second B in Gibbs there, and here.

[donutsweeper.livejournal.com]

I think this is probably a bit extreme, even for Gibbs, but OH! That was a horrible way for him to leave, wasn't it?

[fauxcynic.livejournal.com]

Bwah! ::snort!::

Cool! I'm now grinning like a lunatic, but loved it. (Don't necessarily want to think of what's next, just enjoying the moment. :}

[necessitytd.livejournal.com]

Oh wow. That was a surprising twist for sure! Fun to read since I know it's just fiction but that's a dark Gibbs for sure.